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Exciting writing
Posted On 29 Apr 2015
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I was very impressed with your exciting writing this week so a huge well done! You were asked to write a letter to Mum and Dad but pretending to be Alfie from the Alfie and Annie Rose stories. You explained to Mum and Dad what you had been doing when visiting Grandma, what the weather was like and if you were enjoying yourself. I was pleased that lots of children explained that Alfie was feeling happy and excited to be staying with Grandma in the countryside. There were many beautiful phrases and wonderful words used as well!
Miss Plews.