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Beware – scary sentences!
Posted On 26 Nov 2014
This week we have been working on our scary stories unit in English. We’ve been trying to use a range of sentence openers while building a sense of suspense. What were you favourite openers and can you share some example sentences?
i’m really proud because I used 2 drop in clauses. YAY !!!!! ;P
I enjoyed drop-in clause. Here is one of mine:
Jack, who was now heavily panting,turned to see if it had gone.
It was a great lesson today. 😉 ;D ;P
‘Although her brain was telling her she was alone in the basement, Keira knew she was not…’
Louie: I can’t believe i used all of them!!!!
Helen: At the end of the murky room,there was a pale white girl.
i really enjoyed making a story because I learned some interesting sentences like using a drop in clause. This is my epic one.
Kyle, who was swimming, sunk to the bottom of the pool.
Chelsea:
Colin, who was slowly following the stone path, stopped and saw a creepy old castle.
Ben:
Torin,crept into the house,he heard a dripping noise drip,drip,drip.
I liked the ‘ing’ starter the most and this is my ‘ing’ opener:
Shivering scared, Cat put one more foot forward.
‘Although her brain was telling she was alone in the basment, Keira knew she was not…’
My favorite starter was ly :suddenly
My favorite opener was short,punchy sentences.
I have enjoyed it. it was very fun. (From Masha) I loved the spooky stories (From Ralph)
my story had lots of scary things and i hope it doesn’t happen to me.
Harry)He was extremely anxious to find out what was happening.
Kian)He died.
I managed to use a drop in clause which is:
Megan, who had been cautiously been making her way to the exit, felt a sharp hand grab her painfully.
I LOVE SCARY STORIES!!!!!!!!!! 🙂
Joe: I canlt beleve that I used a drop-in claus Alex hwo was wondering triped over