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Salesse and the Dinosaur
Posted On 17 Sep 2014
We’ve been honing our villainous voices this week (mwa-ha-ha) and have been writing adventure stories. What is your favourite line from your ‘Salesse and the Dinosaur’ story? Perhaps it’s a line spoken by the villainous Plotnik? Or maybe you’re particularly proud of an action-packed sentence you’ve written? Why not post your amazing writing here so that others can be inspired?!
My favorite line was “Secretly, he pressed a button on his mahogany desk and two panels one to the left one to the right heaved and creaked open… “
My favourite sentence is:
So close they came, the two sloppy dinosaurs that she could smell their toxic breath.
My favorite line is:
Suddenly, Salesse saw the elegant enchanted phoenix, the bird she had searched desperately for, and now it could clearly be seen.
Betsy:The frightening dinosaurs shield around his head touched the ceiling making it crumble slowly.
Lewkas: She then turned around and slid back , knocking back the raptors like bowling targets.
My favorite line was,Soon the Dinosaur got so close she could just smell it’s mutant breath.
Lucy
“So you have come for the magic potion,”sneered Plotnik.
Helen
Her stomach ached as she bit her lip nervously.
I’ve got “Slowly and dangerously, the Veloceraptors stalked around the room”
My favorite line that I wrote was “Grab it, you nasty girl, you’ll
regret it either way…” 🙂 😉 🙂 :0
Then gradually the horrifying beast started to plod menacingly around the science room.
Molly:’His gold toothed grin turned to a sneer.
Jasmine:”And what makes you think you will triumph?”
Plotnik is the wierdest person ever!
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