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Exciting Writing…

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This morning, everyone in Class 8 wrote a detailed description of the picture prompt in the first person. What did you write about?

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  1. mani

    I wrote about a man exploring there after being shipwrecked.

  2. Chelsea

    I wrote about a girl who was trying to save her mother in the jungle.

  3. Ben Bell (school council)

    I wrote about him being on an adventure with his dog and when they come to a river they find a mystical harp. They found it because someone screamed and they followed in the direction of the sound but they never found the person that screamed.

  4. lauren

    I wrote that the man was taking his dog for a walk and they see a harp across the river and when they approach the harp it plays the same tune he use to play when he was younger.

  5. Chelsea

    I wrote about a girl trying to find her mother in the jungle but she has been captured.

  6. Travis

    I wrote about a guy looking for an enchanted ruby and he started looking for it there. He came across some weird things there…

  7. FLEtcher

    Getting sent back in time to the Jurassic era to kill a gigantasaurus but the forest gave you hallucinations/illusions

  8. kyran

    I wrote about two friends and there dog going on holiday but then they get lost

  9. Nicola (PlaygroundBuddy)

    I wrote about a girl that was exploring the forest with her Labrador. She then saw a harp, like the one in jack and the beanstalk. Then she saw a girl standing not too far from the harp.

  10. Chelsea

    I wrote about a girl trying to find her mother in the jungle but she has been captured by a evil man.

  11. leah

    I wrote about a girl taking her dog for a walk and she was wondering around the forest and then she found the in the picture.

  12. OSC@R

    I wrote about a boy who was chased by a pack of wolves. He lost them, but when he found the harp he twanged it, the wolves heard it and surrounded him. That was both a cliffhanger and where it finished… 😀

  13. Aruma

    I wrote about a boy who meets a bird in the forest and follows it down the river. When it flies away he notices a harp made out of gold and silver, but when he crosses the river to get a closer look a monster jumps out. I found it really exiting because I love writing detailed descriptions.

  14. Jade

    I wrote about a girl who lost a harp and found it near a river

  15. Janet

    I wrote about a boy and his dog who were walking in the scary woods and saw a harp…

  16. Sam Salter

    A young boy who was diverted from his usual running rout became from poor to rich…

  17. Amalie Hind-Davis

    I wrote about the boy and his dog waking up in the middle of nowhere and I also completed my English target while doing this task!