Story writing…

21 Comments

1. kyran June 16, 2016 at 7:53 am

   I really enjoyed writing this story.
2. Molly June 16, 2016 at 7:55 am

   Thats great.:)
3. Sam Salter June 16, 2016 at 7:57 am

   I liked writing this fun last piece of work
4. Alexander Savkovic (playground buddy) June 16, 2016 at 7:58 am

   I really enjoyed the Year 5 tests they were lots of fun! 😀 -) 😀
5. leah June 16, 2016 at 7:58 am

   In my opinion it was my favourite task so far!! It was really creative and imaginative!
6. Louie June 16, 2016 at 8:00 am

   The video clip was really odd and intriguing as it had no dialogue but I enjoyed writing it.
7. Lucy June 16, 2016 at 8:00 am

   I enjoyed watching the clip and writing it up, although it was quite creepy! 😉
8. Ben Be (school council) June 16, 2016 at 8:04 am

   I really enjoyed doing this writing as first of all it is probably our most important piece of writing and secondly I enjoy writing stories based on a visual prompt.
9. Emma June 16, 2016 at 8:04 am

   The clip was very unusual but really fun to write about. :))
10. Amalie June 16, 2016 at 8:04 am

    It was really fun I bet the year 5’s would of enjoyed it too! :p ;p !
11. Kyle June 16, 2016 at 8:04 am

    This piece of writing was very interesting but also fun to write about I liked the way the shop was designed like a mouth.
12. mani June 16, 2016 at 8:04 am

    The video clip we based our story on was kind of creepy 🙁
13. Joe June 16, 2016 at 8:04 am

    I’ve had a lot of fun writing this story but the clip was quite creepy!! 😮
14. Travis June 16, 2016 at 8:05 am

    Honesty, the clip seemed like a short horror story. It was quite interesting though.
15. Ben Br June 16, 2016 at 8:08 am

    you year 6’s must off had a great time with Mr Mastrelli
16. Eddy June 16, 2016 at 8:08 am

    i had lots of fun doing this peice of narrative writing as i extreemely enjoyed therather strange theme!! however oscar spilled water all over half of my work:o
17. Ben Br June 16, 2016 at 8:11 am

    and we had a great time with Mrs Campbell and surprisingly the test were great fun too!
18. Ivy June 16, 2016 at 8:13 am

    The video was really interesting so that made me think more creatively when I wrote the narrative.
19. Janet June 16, 2016 at 8:14 am

    I loved writing the story of Alma and how she turned in to a doll!
20. Abi (Playground Buddy) June 16, 2016 at 8:15 am

    Hope your doing well in your tests year 5’s!
21. Aruma June 16, 2016 at 8:16 am

    I really enjoyed this session although I found it tricky and confusing. After going through it as a class I finally understood what to do!