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500 Words…

It has been fantasticย reading and listening to all theย excellentย entries for the 500 word competition. Which story did you listen to? What did you enjoy about it?

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  1. lucy Reply

    I really enjoyed Chelsea 500 words story. She included lots of openers and exciting events!

  2. Jade and Masha Reply

    me and mashas favourite story was sophias and yes we really engoyed it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much

  3. Helen Reply

    I heard Millie’s story it was very interesting at the start.It was great!

  4. Chelsea & Molly Reply

    Chelsea: I listened to Oscar’s homework and I really enjoyed it because it was about a earthquake and he had words in it like BOOM!, CRASH!, BANG!.

    Molly:I really liked Onett’s story and it was called ”The mysterious pond and I really liked Chelsea’s story called ”The Magic key”

  5. ben and louie Reply

    Ben: I really liked Oscar’s story :):):):)

    Louie: I liked Mani’s story ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. ben and louie Reply

    Ben: I really liked Oscar’s story ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    Louie: I liked Mani’s story ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Avalon Reply

    I heard lulu’s story and it was a really interesting and made me feel happy ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Scarlet and Millie Reply

    Millie

    I especially enjoyed Lucy’s story as it was interesting to read.

    Scarlet

    I rely enjoyed Millie’s story because it was surprising and fun!
    I also liked Chelsea’s story too because it was interesting.

  9. janet Reply

    good job everybody

    • sara Reply

      sorry janet but are you a new student in class 7 i really want to meet you (:

  10. Travis Reply

    I listened to Manny’s. I liked the words he chose. It did sound like an actual story by an adult! ๐Ÿ˜€ Good job mate!

  11. Kian Reply

    I listened to Oscar’s story. I liked Oscar’s story because he used lots of different openers to make the story interesting.

  12. Joshu@ Reply

    I enjoyed Jacobs story because he re@d it clearly and it made me laugh.

  13. Joe Reply

    I really enjoyed listing to Mani’s story it was excellent

  14. janet Reply

    your story was exciting

  15. sara Reply

    hi everyone can i just ask you who is Janet.

  16. sara Reply

    by the way i miss you all already.

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