500 Words…

17 Comments

1. lucy February 27, 2015 at 2:44 pm Reply

   I really enjoyed Chelsea 500 words story. She included lots of openers and exciting events!
2. Jade and Masha February 27, 2015 at 2:48 pm Reply

   me and mashas favourite story was sophias and yes we really engoyed it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
3. Helen February 27, 2015 at 2:50 pm Reply

   I heard Millie’s story it was very interesting at the start.It was great!
4. Chelsea & Molly February 27, 2015 at 2:50 pm Reply

   Chelsea: I listened to Oscar’s homework and I really enjoyed it because it was about a earthquake and he had words in it like BOOM!, CRASH!, BANG!.

   Molly:I really liked Onett’s story and it was called ”The mysterious pond and I really liked Chelsea’s story called ”The Magic key”
5. ben and louie February 27, 2015 at 2:52 pm Reply

   Ben: I really liked Oscar’s story :):):):)

   Louie: I liked Mani’s story 🙂 🙂 🙂
6. ben and louie February 27, 2015 at 2:52 pm Reply

   Ben: I really liked Oscar’s story 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

   Louie: I liked Mani’s story 🙂 🙂 🙂
7. Avalon February 27, 2015 at 2:53 pm Reply

   I heard lulu’s story and it was a really interesting and made me feel happy 🙂 🙂 🙂
8. Scarlet and Millie February 27, 2015 at 2:53 pm Reply

   Millie

   I especially enjoyed Lucy’s story as it was interesting to read.

   Scarlet

   I rely enjoyed Millie’s story because it was surprising and fun!
   I also liked Chelsea’s story too because it was interesting.
9. janet February 27, 2015 at 2:54 pm Reply

   good job everybody
   • sara March 1, 2015 at 5:59 pm Reply

     sorry janet but are you a new student in class 7 i really want to meet you (:
10. Travis February 27, 2015 at 2:54 pm Reply

    I listened to Manny’s. I liked the words he chose. It did sound like an actual story by an adult! 😀 Good job mate!
11. Kian February 27, 2015 at 2:55 pm Reply

    I listened to Oscar’s story. I liked Oscar’s story because he used lots of different openers to make the story interesting.
12. Joshu@ February 27, 2015 at 2:56 pm Reply

    I enjoyed Jacobs story because he re@d it clearly and it made me laugh.
13. Joe February 27, 2015 at 2:59 pm Reply

    I really enjoyed listing to Mani’s story it was excellent
14. janet February 27, 2015 at 3:00 pm Reply

    your story was exciting
15. sara March 1, 2015 at 5:57 pm Reply

    hi everyone can i just ask you who is Janet.
16. sara March 1, 2015 at 5:57 pm Reply

    by the way i miss you all already.