We have some amazing poets in Class 7 who showed off their writing and performance skills in our Key Stage 2 assembly this week. How did you describe fireworks in your poem?
I really liked reading my poem 😀 🙂 😛
I really liked the firework poems because they were so creative!
i really enjoyed listning to other peoples peoms
I enjoyed listening to all the fireworks poets .
Even I didn’t do one the students that have written one described fireworks in a really good way.C
They fizz, bang, whizz and pop, their sparks swiftly flowing like a waterfall. They’re ruby red, sparkling gold emerald green and sapphire blue. Rockets shoot and Catherine wheels spin. 🙂 😀 😛
Up ahead you lerk,
You fly so high,
Trying to reach the sky,
I really liked the firework poems because i is so fun and creative.Here is one of my lines:Fingers go numb , follow my mum.
I put crash and whoosh and bang.
I did mine as a shape poem.
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I thought other people’s were great and I liked the rythem on some of them.
I loved them all.BOOM!!!!!!
Rushing,reaching its apogee,
keeping the best to last the end is nigh.
flickering fireworks crackling at night,
In the dark flashing streaks set light.
that is a lovly comment
here are the first 3 lines of my poem:
I could smell the bitter smoke,
There was a wiff of a hot dog smell,
I had to much candy floss I did not feel well!
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