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Salesse and the Dinosaur

We’ve been honing our villainous voices this week (mwa-ha-ha) and have been writing adventure stories.  What is your favourite line from your ‘Salesse and the Dinosaur’ story?  Perhaps it’s a line spoken by the villainous Plotnik?  Or maybe you’re particularly proud of an action-packed sentence you’ve written?  Why not post your amazing writing here so that others can be inspired?!

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  1. Osc@r :) :) Reply

    My favorite line was “Secretly, he pressed a button on his mahogany desk and two panels one to the left one to the right heaved and creaked open… “

  2. Kian Reply

    My favourite sentence is:

    So close they came, the two sloppy dinosaurs that she could smell their toxic breath.

  3. Mollie Reply

    My favorite line is:

    Suddenly, Salesse saw the elegant enchanted phoenix, the bird she had searched desperately for, and now it could clearly be seen.

  4. Betsy and Lewkas Reply

    Betsy:The frightening dinosaurs shield around his head touched the ceiling making it crumble slowly.

    Lewkas: She then turned around and slid back , knocking back the raptors like bowling targets.

  5. Joshua Reply

    My favorite line was,Soon the Dinosaur got so close she could just smell it’s mutant breath.

  6. lucy and helen Reply

    Lucy
    “So you have come for the magic potion,”sneered Plotnik.
    Helen
    Her stomach ached as she bit her lip nervously.

  7. Jacob Reply

    I’ve got “Slowly and dangerously, the Veloceraptors stalked around the room”

  8. 0nett Reply

    My favorite line that I wrote was “Grab it, you nasty girl, you’ll
    regret it either way…” 🙂 😉 🙂 :0

  9. Millie :) Reply

    Then gradually the horrifying beast started to plod menacingly around the science room.

  10. Jasmine&Molly Reply

    Molly:’His gold toothed grin turned to a sneer.
    Jasmine:”And what makes you think you will triumph?”

  11. ben Reply

    Plotnik is the wierdest person ever!

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