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Scary Stories

How did you build the suspense in your story?

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13 Responses
  1. Elly

    I used phrases such a ‘Amy whimpered’ and ‘Slowly she creeped along the long corridor turning her head occasionally to check the cook was still there’

  2. nicola

    The two girls went in to the lift and then looked in the smashed mirror a scary doll appeared, they looked at each other then looked at each and then they looked at the ground and the doll started singing ring a rosie.

  3. Sam Salter (school council)

    My story is about a soldier called Sam who’s 32 years old,Sam is a brave and fearless character in my story.

  4. josh&stan

    as they walked through to the kitchen, it was nothing like they saw through the miserable window. [josh]

    the fox was staring at me stan