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Scary Stories

How did you build the suspense in your story?

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  1. Caleb

    First Phil heard creaking noises, then creepy nursery rhymes then foot steps.

    • Kyle

      First Timmy J.R sat down and the chair leg snapped.

  2. Elly

    I used phrases such a ‘Amy whimpered’ and ‘Slowly she creeped along the long corridor turning her head occasionally to check the cook was still there’

  3. martina

    Leslie herd strange rustling then a thud and mysterious footsteps…

  4. Euan

    Dave heard faint creeks and foot steps… He was not alone

  5. Emma

    Mummmm! Moaned Amy

  6. nicola

    The two girls went in to the lift and then looked in the smashed mirror a scary doll appeared, they looked at each other then looked at each and then they looked at the ground and the doll started singing ring a rosie.

  7. Amalie

    Ginger and Calli heard footsteps getting louder and louder.

  8. Sam Salter (school council)

    My story is about a soldier called Sam who’s 32 years old,Sam is a brave and fearless character in my story.

  9. Nikoo

    I used varied sentences and descriptive words to build suspense.

  10. Kyle

    First the metal chair leg snapped.

  11. josh&stan

    as they walked through to the kitchen, it was nothing like they saw through the miserable window. [josh]

    the fox was staring at me stan

  12. Emma

    Someone tapped on Amy’s shoulder.