While the Year 5’s have been doing their tests this week, the Year 6’s in Class 8 have been writing a narrative based on the short video clip story of Alma. This video clip created a lot of debate and was the stimulus for some super planning, editing and writing!
I really enjoyed writing this story.
Thats great.:)
I liked writing this fun last piece of work
I really enjoyed the Year 5 tests they were lots of fun! 😀 -) 😀
In my opinion it was my favourite task so far!! It was really creative and imaginative!
The video clip was really odd and intriguing as it had no dialogue but I enjoyed writing it.
I enjoyed watching the clip and writing it up, although it was quite creepy! 😉
I really enjoyed doing this writing as first of all it is probably our most important piece of writing and secondly I enjoy writing stories based on a visual prompt.
The clip was very unusual but really fun to write about. :))
It was really fun I bet the year 5’s would of enjoyed it too! :p ;p !
This piece of writing was very interesting but also fun to write about I liked the way the shop was designed like a mouth.
The video clip we based our story on was kind of creepy 🙁
I’ve had a lot of fun writing this story but the clip was quite creepy!! 😮
Honesty, the clip seemed like a short horror story. It was quite interesting though.
you year 6’s must off had a great time with Mr Mastrelli
i had lots of fun doing this peice of narrative writing as i extreemely enjoyed therather strange theme!! however oscar spilled water all over half of my work:o
and we had a great time with Mrs Campbell and surprisingly the test were great fun too!
The video was really interesting so that made me think more creatively when I wrote the narrative.
I loved writing the story of Alma and how she turned in to a doll!
Hope your doing well in your tests year 5’s!
I really enjoyed this session although I found it tricky and confusing. After going through it as a class I finally understood what to do!