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I wrote about the maze in high adventure

I used ‘the scorching bright sun hit the dirty window’

I wrote about my Asthma attack when I was 3

Wading and slimy

I wrote about when I got my pet rabbit called Sonny. I wrote that exuberance and impatience overwhelmed me and that the butterflies in my stomach turned to dragons.

i wrote about at high adventure when the fire alarm went off and i had to help Ava outside as she had no shoes on. i tried to include as many senses as possible, smell, see, hear, feel and taste.

I wrote about the first time i held a bird it was a caramel brown barn owl which surprisingly called Caramel!

I wrote about my brother and when he was born I used phrases like the bleakness of the hospital and bounded through the olive green door.