Today you wrote about a memorable event from your life. What did you write about? Can you remember two fabulous examples of descriptive language you used?
I used a powerful simile towards the start of my work. This was: At the age of 9, I vividly remember ecstatically strolling into Pets At Home, and I think of this as clearly as the river of thoughts that brewed inside my head that very day. Although I can’t remember it word for word, it was something like that.
I wrote about the maze in high adventure
i wrote about puding ,my kitty cat
I used ‘the scorching bright sun hit the dirty window’
I wrote about my Asthma attack when I was 3
I wrote about high adventure
Wading and slimy
One scorching day and faster.
I wrote about when I got my pet rabbit called Sonny. I wrote that exuberance and impatience overwhelmed me and that the butterflies in my stomach turned to dragons.
cute and wonderfully bushy tail
i wrote about at high adventure when the fire alarm went off and i had to help Ava outside as she had no shoes on. i tried to include as many senses as possible, smell, see, hear, feel and taste.
I wrote about when I got a Table tennis table for Christmas!
I wrote about the first time i held a bird it was a caramel brown barn owl which surprisingly called Caramel!
i wrote about high adventure canoeing 🙂
I wrote about my brother and when he was born I used phrases like the bleakness of the hospital and bounded through the olive green door.
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